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Blog #13

I chose to read chapter 7 “So what? Who cares?” Saying why it matters. Throughout my paper I was having trouble making sure that I hit all of my main points describing why the arts and sciences should be mixed together. I needed to explain who, why and what it mattered to instead of just stating facts without any reasoning why to back up my claims. Reading this chapter gave me a better understanding on how to do so, and it provided me with many templates to help fix my work. I made sure that my claims connected with the quote given and I better explained why my claims mattered so much.

 

Before:  In Mark Boslough writing “We Must Protect U.S. Investment in Scientific Knowledge” he introduces the idea that science can be for everyone, no matter who you are. “One does not have to be a scientist to think scientifically.” Anyone is able to study anything in a way that makes them think, learn, and observe. It is not just scientists who do things this way.  Without changing the overall science bases and adding art to them, it can be used as a compromise. This is able to help us get a better understanding and view on new inventions that are trying to be created every single day.

After: A dental hygienist can put artwork on the wall to help explain procedures clearly to the patients so they are able to understand and feel more comfortable with what is being done. In Mark Boslough writing “We Must Protect U.S. Investment in Scientific Knowledge” he introduces the idea that science can be for everyone, no matter who you are. “One does not have to be a scientist to think scientifically.” At first, people may think that you need to be a scientist to understand anything that is going on. Even people who are not scientific thinkers will be able to understand a difficult procedure better if they have a visual right in front of them describing what is going on. Having the image of a procedure that is going on right in front of the patient will help them to become relaxed and to better understand what is going on.     

1 Comment

  1. elishaemerson

    Your second paragraph is way clearer! Well done!!!

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