I believe that science should be approached with an open mind, and their should always be room for improvement to be added. “Gilbert accepted that explanation, even though he had arrived at the crater thinking it was formed by an impact, (a good scientist does not allow personal feelings to get in the way of evidence).” (Boslough). Brining the arts into the sciences can causes an emotional side. “The arts help us cope with these issues by engaging, not avoiding, the deep emotions of intimate loss involved and retelling over and over again the story of the human condition and its limits. (Yo-Yo Ma). The arts and sciences should remain separate because they both have their own thing to offer. The sciences should be more just the facts instead of brining the emotional side of art in.
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